Rabu, 16 Oktober 2013

Describing Object

MY CUTE STUDENT

I have a cute student. He is in kindergarten. His name is Fariz. He has round face and thick eyebrows. He has slanted eyes and chubby cheeks. His nose looked flat because he is chubby. He has short black heavy hair. He has bright skin. He can’t sit for a long time because his belly is bloat. He likes wearing a t-shirt and short pant. He has some habitual. For example, when he felt tired for sitting he would take a deep breath, when he did not on a good mood to study, he will make scribble on his book. I prefer play a game when he get bored because I can't push him to study. He is so funny. :)

4 komentar:

  1. "...he get bored because I can't push him to study" after "he" you should use verb+s/es. So "...he gets bored because I can't push him to study".

    BalasHapus
  2. His nose looked flat because he is chubby---->His nose looks like flat because he is chubby
    He has some habitual--->He has some habituals (you have to make clear your sentence, which habitual does want you to describe?, such as, special habituals, unique habitual or another.

    BalasHapus
  3. sound like fun.. i think that's like my experience

    BalasHapus
  4. He likes wearing a t-shirt and short pant. add "s" letter on pant word to be "pants"

    BalasHapus